Redemption- the sequel of my book "The Seller of Sins"

I decided to write a book in a series after I read reviews for part one, "The Seller of Sins". It inspired me to spread the word further. In first book, a married couple is described in detail, their stories are parallel, and the present and past are tangled. What made Karolina cheat, and what made Filip do the same, is explained in the first book.

In the sequel "Redemption", I made more details about the story. The mysterious character, Blanka, deserves an explanation, as the end of part one was uncertain. Readers can interpret the story in different ways, to judge Filip or to judge Karolina. Karolina wanted a child, and Filip wanted to taste the life of a playboy, so their conflict was inevitable. Adriana is a new character who is moving the plot.

In the role of Karolina's virtual lover, Omer will get an important part in the second book. Now, their meeting is real, so they will have more possibilities.

If you were judged by the community because you don't have a child, you will love the book. If you are open-minded and love dramatic stories, this one is for you.

Dark and mysterious moments are the background of this book.

This is not a happily ever after fairy tale. This is a contemporary romance story and a brutally realistic story about unhappy marriage.

The reviewer said:

The second part of the short story "The Seller of Sins II Redemption" by Kristina Gallo in my opinion is much better than the first part. As in the first part, we follow the same characters, Karolina and Filip. Their relationship is on the verge of breaking even though they have overcome difficult moments. Blanka's cousin Adriana finds compromising pictures on her laptop and decides to blackmail Filip. But when she meets him, she changes her plans and has sex with him. The fragile bond between Karoline and Filip comes to the brink of an abyss.
As in the first part of the story, it re-examines relationships that are based on sexuality from the very beginning, love is on the margins. But what happens when the excitement passes, can such connections between people survive or will they simply collapse like a tower of cards. If we live in computer virtuality or life virtuality, that virtuality always dissipates in the end and life remains.
I would recommend the book to lovers of romance with a dose of eroticism.

If you read the book, I would love your review.

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